Thursday, February 8, 2007

My Work

1. I think I told my story pretty well. I made sure to use detail and tried to make everything flow together
2. I think my conclusion was what I did specially well because usually i have weak conclusions
3. I think i could improve some of the detail and maybe reword some things. I also forget to check the transitions at the beginning of my paragraphs .
4. I generated ideas for my writing by just naming things that had to do with reading and then picking the one that i could write with the most detail
5. I first wrote my narrative down on paper because my ideas and thoughts come out faster that way. After that i typed it and made some revisions.
6. I didnt use any photos or other graphics for details. I jsut used my memory
7. Others' responses didn't really influence my writing
8. Next time i thinkj i would use a thesaurus to come up with different words to describe detail.

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